Mrs Sumiko said, "Everything's alright but..."
"What's wrong?" Mrs Itosan asked anxiously.
Mrs Sumiko said in a sad manner, "Today we went to the school eco-garden to observe the plants during Science lesson and unfortunately, he fell into the fish pond. During recess, he slipped on a puddle of soup and fell again. He suffered bruises and grazes on his knee. After recess during PE lessons, he was hit by a basketball on his head.Fortunately, he did not suffer any serious injuries. For the rest of the day, I kept him by my side in case of more accidents."
- Words in blue are edits from Ms L :)
By: Jolene,Diyana and Janwin :)
Quite plain but creative. They could think of so many accident is good but add some more vocabulary to improve the passage
ReplyDeleteJia Jia,
ReplyDeleteQuite funny. creative...