Mrs Sumiko greeted the Isotans. She then sighed before saying, "Izumi was very careless during the first few periods of the day. He scalded his tongue and bit it while eating hot noodles. He then fell and injured his chin. Thankfully he was not seriously injured."
"Thank goodness!" cried Mrs Itosan.
Mrs Sumiko smiled and went on, "In the last few periods, Izumi was a good role model in class. He was an attentive listener and a good student. Therefore, I have chosen him to be the temporary class chairman."
"Really?" exclaimed Mr Itosan. "Well Izumi, we will have your favorite Kobe beef as a reward for your excellent behaviour today."
"Thank you daddy! Goodbye Mrs Sumiko!" said the boy happily. Izumi grinned as he thought of the delicious Kobe beef waiting for him.
It is good but being rewarded is too common
ReplyDeleteI think that they are very creative...
ReplyDeleteAnd the last part of the story is quite funny...
But have a lot of mistakes...
Can be improved... =P
Its has a very nice ending n keep it up!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteCan be improved in grammar mistakes and last part of the story.Anyway, good work!-Nur Amirah
ReplyDeleteRewards r good as it can build up the children confident!!!!!!!!!!!! Good job!!!
ReplyDeleteHaha such a cute ending yeah ? But the thing i am not happy with is it makes me hungry :( haha joking love it :)
ReplyDeletewow nice it has a good ending and i like the ending hahas
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