Thursday, February 11, 2010

Jolene Chang , Celine , Chelsea and Charlene (1E4)

Mrs Sumiko smiled and said, "Izumi is fine except for the cut on his leg. He fell down during recess while he was playing catch with his friends and hurt himself. I guess he will just have to rest that leg well for a couple of days before he will be up for games and running again."
"Oh, okay. Thanks for your help, Mrs Sumiko."
They walked to the carpark. As they got into the car, Izumi's mother said with a long, drawn-out sigh, "Izumi, you are always injuring yourself! When will you stop making me worry about you?"
"I don't know, Ma," answered Izumi truthfully, and sighed himself.

7 comments:

  1. A intersting and great continuation of the story. Nice. :D

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  2. an interesting story which was able to tell us about a someone who was careless just by a short pharagraph(zhong rong,1E4)

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  3. It is a good continuation of the story. Short and sweet!:}

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  4. Nice and unique ending... hehe (fardiana 1E4)

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  5. Nice, good ending!! (Suzi)

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  6. Cool story! Nice ending. So funny....


    Vernice goh (1E4)

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