Dear all, for the format of situational writing, whether you put in a SENDER'S address is dependent on whether you are in the SAME ORGANIZATION. If you're writing out to someone else in a formal capacity, then go ahead and put an address. If you're writing as a student to a member of the staff, you DON'T need an address.
If you're still unsure, use the following format for FORMAL LETTER (necessary stuff in highlights):
_______________________________________________________________________
Sender's address
Sender's postal code
DATE
Recipient's name
Recipient's title / post in organisation
Dear (Recipient), (<-- note the comma!)
Re: (Purpose of letter)
(body of letter in sensible paragraphs)
Yours sincerely, (<---- Capital Y, small letter s, note comma!)
SIGNATURE
FULL NAME
SENDER'S DESIGNATION (if any)
Because my students will always call me 'cher'. Because I love the language. Because my karma led me here. Waiting for the mythical being called 'Perfect Student'.
Tuesday, October 12, 2010
Sunday, October 3, 2010
Vocabulary for Narratives
Appearance
- rangy build (lean and muscular figure)
- running to fat (nearly obese figure)
- grizzled and hoary old men (gray-haired, gray-bearded, tough old men)
- aquiline features (very sharp features)
- perspiration rolled down in tiny rivulets
- pleasingly plump figure
- nails that had been gnawed into jagged stumps
- slender pianist fingers (very elegant fingers)
- long raven tresses tumbling down her back (long wavy black hair)
- hair gelled into spikes (spiky hair)
Posture/actions
- shoulders slumping as if he/she had been defeated
- insolently leaning against [vertical support]
- devil-may-care swagger
- smug and self-satisfied saunter / sashay (for females only!)
- huddled together in a corner for safety
- wringing his/her hands while he/she tried to find an excuse
- fingers flexed and relaxed in an effort to calm (oneself) down
- hobbled painfully along the pathway
- rubbed the back of the head, as if embarrassed to be caught in a lie
- lounged confidently in the seat, aware that all eyes were on him/her.
Description of indoors
- musty darkness of an unused room
- dust motes danced up the narrow shaft of light
- All sound was deadened by thick curtains
- the room glittered with assorted brightly-colored knickknacks
- spartan room with hardly any furniture, let alone decorations
- opulent furnishings spoke of a taste for luxury, if not of style (not a stylish room!)
- the room was slightly cluttered, indicating the busy lives of the owners
- every surface was polished to a mirror finish (everything is gleaming)
- papers littered the surface and there was no organization evident to the naked eye (a very messy desk)
- Floor-to-ceiling windows allowed sunlight to flood into the room, giving it a cozy atmosphere
Description of outdoors
- heat shimmered over the pavement (very hot day)
- rain hammered on the roads and the drains were churning with miniature rapids and assorted debris
- leaves brushed and whispered high above in the canopy
- sandy grit stuck to his/her ankles (walking on sandy or pebbly ground)
- veritable maze of alleys and side streets, all crammed with push carts and stalls (in a city with lots of small shops and small alleyways)
- wide-open field, where tiny white and pink flowers dotted like stars in a verdant sky
- gray-blue expanse of water, interrupted by occasional white lines of foam slowly washing up ashore (the sea)
- The brisk wind danced about, whipping dead leaves into frisky jogs about the pavement
- sun beat down relentlessly, baking everything in its sight
- sloshed wetly through puddles of muddy water
Description of emotion/attitude using physical cues
- eyes glimmering with [emotion] (nearly overwhelmed by happiness or sadness)
- obstinate set of his/her jaw (showing stubbornness)
- gleeful smirk (very satisfied smile)
- diamond-hard glint of his/her eyes (showing determination)
- lazy slouch over his/her desk
- forceful strides headed towards [whatever location] (indicating sternness or determination)
- shy shuffling of feet and lowered heads
- cleared his throat pompously (wants to show that he's important)
- rebellious snarl and the squaring of her shoulders (defiant and aggressive)
- timidly edging forward
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